The way Cherron writes.

"Safty is withought a doubt an hugeissue ,but no the name shouldnt change .....WE SHOULD!!!!"
This quote is from a post from a student in my class named Cherron.I chose this quote because
I like the way it was put together especially the last few words. she made some errors but then so does everyone else.Cherron has an enthusiastic way of writing and uses a nice body of words.
From the last two words she gets her point across and fully expresses her opinion be writing
"WE SHOULD !!!!" In all capitalized words.I think she has an original way of writing.
The subject I took this quote from was about whether or not Philadelphia should have the name changed.From the start she points out the problems of the city,choosing to focus on the situation
of philadelphia.She answers the question on the last sentence about what should be changed
and gets her point across.Cherron doesnt waste time and gets to the point of the matter
and has a skillful way of putting it into a structured paragraph.